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Your life after October 8th

March 11, 2019
By Nelsonpachecofpsd91 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
Nelsonpachecofpsd91 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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It was on October 8th

that God called your name

we are here left with the pain

we will still remain strong every day  


You went to school with bad grades every day

your mom wanted you to get better grades

your teachers did not understand the pain

that you dealt with every day


You couldn't escape from all your pain

you saw your mom cry almost every day

she went through too much pain


your friends thought you were happy

but really you numb and just wanted to change

they made mistakes and didn't understand your pain


People are fake and only want fame

you didn't care about the fame

you just wanted to change

 

I miss my cousin she left us on October 8th

she was the person who changed

my life and what I do every day.


The author's comments:

This poem is about a loved one that passed on October 8th and the middle part is about being depressed and going to school and last is about wanting to change and how the death of the loved one change a life 

 

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Mraleigh said...
on Mar. 22 2019 at 10:58 am
Mraleigh, Chicago, Illinois
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Congrats Nelson!!!