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May 16, 2009
By robert3212 GOLD, Harlingen, Texas
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robert3212 GOLD, Harlingen, Texas
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The opportunities in life are that which takes us away from normality.

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I saw you today
i saw you, and my heart began to quake
i saw you today
i saw you and my hands began to shake

i felt you near
my love for you;my deepest fear

i saw you today
i saw you today; words i could no longer make
i saw you today
i saw you today ; my love i say is fake

i heard your voice
and cupid took away thy choice

i saw you today
and no longer can i fake
forced without wake
my heart at stake

i loved you today
and thy skies turned gray

© Jalina C., Martinez, GA

The author's comments:
well what really got me to write this is a girl im in love with. i was in class one day and my heart just started racing when she came in soooo....i was inspired to do this. ihope you guys like it. and i think i'll get some more out about the same person. another thing that pushes me to write poetry about her is the complications that seperate us. religion mainly.
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xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 10:09 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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&quot;The goal isn&#039;t to live forever, but create something that will.&quot;<br /> &quot;If you wanna go, baby let&#039;s go; if you wanna rock, I&#039;m ready to roll.&#039;&#039;<br /> &quot;No one ever said it&#039;d be easy. They just said it&#039;d be worth it.&quot; &lt;3

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awww this is beautiful. so sweet(; i especially love "And cupid took away thy choice." You're a really gr8 writerrr. plz keep writinggg !! nd good luckkk ! ;D
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 10:06 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

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i loveeee it(:
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 3:00 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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&quot;Some things will never change&quot;---Tupac

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Beautiful. And thoughtful.