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Its My Heart
May 31, 2009
You…
Sitting there…
I know you..
I know why they stare…
Why cant you see…
What its doing to me…
Hey…
Look at me…
Im talking to you…
Why cant you see…
We’re just alike…
Please come back…
Wait…
Turn around…
Can you hear that…
That loud sound…
Resounding so evenly…
Its my heart whats left of me…
Please..
Can you help…
I cant find it…
And I cant seem to tell…
It seems to be coming from somewhere outside…
I don’t understand, even though I try…
Stop…
Please don’t leave…
I want to give you my heart…
Whats left of me…
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This article has 5 comments.
Not bad at all. Sounds like the speaker is doing all she can to whisper when she wants to scream. She seems weary, confused, and possibly a little delusional. Nice style. I think you'd be a better lyricist than a poet. You seem to have that mode of thinking. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
awwww..that was really good I loved the para
"Wait…
Turn around…
Can you hear that…
That loud sound…
Resounding so evenly…
Its my heart whats left of me…"
that caught my eye for sure..and also the last one..
beautiful and something which I am sure most of us have felt before..good work!
"Wait…
Turn around…
Can you hear that…
That loud sound…
Resounding so evenly…
Its my heart whats left of me…"
that caught my eye for sure..and also the last one..
beautiful and something which I am sure most of us have felt before..good work!
Nayr139 said...
on Jun. 11 2009 at 10:50 pm
AMAZING! and thanks again for the comments and i have like 10 things pending cause its taking forever for them to make sure its not inappropriate LOL but ill leave you a comment whenever they get to it
pinksage33 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 11 2009 at 12:17 am
Nice work!!! keep wrighting.
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