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My Dear
June 15, 2009
I loved you, my dear
For you yet loved me
Though reproach tore us farther apart
We competed, my dear
In school and in sport
Though you envied me, turned me away
We were perfect, my dear
A match meets a match
Though publicly ‘twas never quite true
I showed you, my dear
My love, my sweet love
Though ‘gainst instinct you ruined our bond
Ne’er more, my dear
Shall we love as we did
Gone are those days, so alas
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Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 26 2009 at 10:09 pm
Wow, I really like this poem! [Thanks by the way for commenting on my poem "A Fantasy," If I may ask for you to look at some others!] Love the poem!! Keep writing
Pinkvolleyballgirl, thanks for commenting on this and my other poem, Dinner of Dreams. Haha, I assure you that when I was commenting on The World We Live In, I was not just "pretending to care, to understand." I mean, I wasn't just commenting to get you to comment on this. And thanks for the advice on my other poem, I'll think about how to make it longer. : )
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2009 at 5:34 am
amazing poem!!! you are a beautiful poet :)
hey_itskatelyn PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2009 at 11:30 pm
Hey abigail!
You commented on the piece i wrote called the world we live in. thanks so much for giving your opinion. Anyway, you were talking about incorporating honesty and feeling into writing. I think you did a really great job. The very best way to achieve it is to merely write from your heart. Keep it up:)
You commented on the piece i wrote called the world we live in. thanks so much for giving your opinion. Anyway, you were talking about incorporating honesty and feeling into writing. I think you did a really great job. The very best way to achieve it is to merely write from your heart. Keep it up:)
Nancy said...
on Jul. 1 2009 at 7:41 pm
This is an awesome poem, Abigail. It is beautiful!
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