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June 22, 2009
By Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?&quot; - Mario Pei<br /> &quot;I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn&#039;t, I would die.&quot; Isaac Asimov

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Laugh, love, cry,
smile, jump, collapse,
pout, hiss, sing,
experience both ups
and downs,
for what good is
day without night,
black without white,
dark without light?
So don't shy away
from challenges or
a chance to bring joy
to another soul,
for we are all in this together,
to live life
to the fullest.

© Alison L., Longs, SC

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Wish I could follow my own advice!!
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windswift DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 8:27 pm
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

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simply beautiful. it strikes the truth of a double edged sword, like you said; light and dark are always there, always a choice will exist. Love it.
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jul. 1 2010 at 9:42 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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i totally loved this poem^^ i looved wat u said and how u said it:)) beautiful workk
Inkspired PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 2:34 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?&quot; - Mario Pei<br /> &quot;I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn&#039;t, I would die.&quot; Isaac Asimov

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thanks for all the comments and great advice, I'll be sure to look for your book! 
windswift DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 5:17 pm
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
80 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

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hello, this is windswift agian, long time no see, i love the poem, it has great form and good content, its a four out of five, remember, let emotions onto your paper, its what makes a poem the greatest it can be. and by the way, im publishing a book of my poems some time soon, look for it online, ill tell you the name when i come up with it.