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Oakland Summer
Young, and brave
Exploring the Deep End,
Six years of age
Clinging onto the edge
Cold, wet stone,
Fingers starting to slip
The danger unknown;
Just a fun Summer trip
My grip let go,
Too sudden to cry out
Plunging into the cold depths;
Crystal water silencing my shouts
The stinging of the chlorine in my eyes,
As I grasp without purchase for the light;
The bright Oakland Sun in the sky
Reflecting through the suffocating coffin of water,
In which I thought I would die
Lifetimes passed in seconds,
Eternity died that day
And by my grandfather’s grace,
From Death’s cold embrace, I was saved
Disregarding my dignity, because I had almost drowned
Salty tears mixed with chlorine-water on my face
Lungs burning, throat raw, surrounded by concerned frowns
None of those mattered; I was lost, and now found
And by the resilience only a child can display,
I was learning to swim the very next day
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This poem is an account of an experience I had as a child, when my flight to Dallas was delayed. Staying at a Motel 6 with my grandparents, I made friends with some other kids who were staying there at the time, and even though I did not know how to swim, I decided to play with them. My grandparents were talking with one of the boy’s grandmother, as I was playing in the shallow end. Trying to look cool, as everyone else in the pool was able to swim in the six-feet end, I inched my way over along the edge.
Kicking and thrashing underwater for about two minutes, everyone except my grandfather thought I was just “messing around,” and so they paid no attention. Thanks to him, I have been able to conquer numerous bodies of water in the ten years that have passed since that day.