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Coffee Sun
July 19, 2009
as we walked down the tide,
my sundress whips down
on the white chrests
we walk on water
my feet graze the sea salt
as he grabs my waist and drags
my breath away under
the surface
my mind goes fuzzy as my eyes
meet his
life stares at me through moonbeam
lenses and a catch
a star in my hand as i slip
my hand into his and
take him under with me
we float neutral in the blackened
midst of liquid
sun
his eyes twinkle and he
spurs to the surface
i follow
we fly to the diamonds above
they twist and turn,
becoming my sundress and
my heart
he steals my smile
i steal his
we burst into a million stars
we take flight
© Brandon T., Manila, UT
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This article has 5 comments.
LaylaViolet said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 9:52 am
Oh, and 'Coffee Sun' is really good.
LaylaViolet said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 9:51 am
I'm reading your poem, right, then I click on your 'More by this author' thing and I see that you put one of my poems as your favorite.
I just want to say thank you very much for that. I deeply appreciate your... um, your 'liking' my poem.
I just want to say thank you very much for that. I deeply appreciate your... um, your 'liking' my poem.
FlamableFyre DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 6:21 pm
thanks :) thats one of my fav parts too!
SilverAngel SILVER said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 11:31 am
I love this poem! It goes so deep! I like the "He steals my smile" part:)☺☻
mandygale77 said...
on Sep. 20 2009 at 11:49 am
I just had to comment on your description of yourself. I have a small interest in psychology too, although I don't want to be a psychologist, and I thought it was cool you want to work with autistic kids, because my little brother's autistic. So, yeah. :)
