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Let It Go

September 24, 2009
By LilaW PLATINUM, Brampton, ON, Other
LilaW PLATINUM, Brampton, ON, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Live. Laugh. Love. Fight. Flight. Get it right.<3


All the pain…
Let it go.
All the anger pulsing through your veins…
Let it go.
All the hurt you felt at that exact moment…
Let it go.
The burn that fired through your entire body…
Let it go.
Ensnaring your senses, clouding your mind…
Let it go.
Fire.
Let it go.
Burn.
Let it go.
Pain.
Agony.
Hurt.
Tears.
Let it go.
Let it go.
Hurt. Pain.
Blood.
Sweat.
Tears.
Let it go.
Let it go.
Let it go.
Let it…
…Fly away.
…Leave.
…Run away.
…Spill out.
…Move on.
Go.


The author's comments:
What I really don't understand is why people ridicule those who are emo)tional. I find that really silly since they too have probably felt (emo)tional once or twice in their lives. And that's what this poem is about. Letting those disheartening feelings go...

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on Oct. 6 2009 at 8:35 pm
KiraKira PLATINUM, Cardiff By The Sea, California
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Favorite Quote:
Do not pity the dead, Harry. Pity the living, and above all, pity those who live without love -Albus Dumbledore

This is good, but I'd advise you to use fewer line breaks.