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Revolution

March 22, 2010
By salamander254 BRONZE, Branford, Connecticut
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salamander254 BRONZE, Branford, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It is better to die on your feet than to live on your knees.&quot;<br /> -Che Guevara

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We live in a country where democracy's acceptable,
As if our candidates are electable,
Does racism exist? Yes but its limited,
It's classism thats spread, in your face and intimate,
The time has come, we've slowed due to bureaucracy,
So dumbly naming a black hole as democracy,
Tighten your belt, get up and get ready,
It's time for revolution to make this nation steady,
My words may be harsh, but they arte true,
Each person fight for people, like me and you

© Alejandra D., Milford, CT

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Ryan.J.Campos BRONZE said...
on Apr. 17 2012 at 8:33 am
Ryan.J.Campos BRONZE, Nope Central, Illinois
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&#039;If i shall die, let me walk beside you, so you don&#039;t have to face the worlds problems on your own, and i&#039;ll be there for you , no matter what, i love you.&#039;

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I think you just quoted Immortal Technique :) good political artists.
JeanGrey2 said...
on May. 3 2010 at 9:39 pm
JeanGrey2, Lima, Ohio
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&quot;Wearing pants is the perfect way to avoid suspicion as a nudist.&quot;

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*claps* 5 stars!!
salamander254 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 5:13 pm
salamander254 BRONZE, Branford, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It is better to die on your feet than to live on your knees.&quot;<br /> -Che Guevara

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thank you :)
ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE said...
on Apr. 19 2010 at 7:46 pm
ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE, Blue Springs, Missouri
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To make a difference in the world, you have to be different from the world.

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sweetness! i like this one :)
salamander254 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 5:00 pm
salamander254 BRONZE, Branford, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It is better to die on your feet than to live on your knees.&quot;<br /> -Che Guevara

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thank you :)
LostAngel DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 9:44 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Just live your life, if people don&#039;t like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it&quot; &quot;if you can&#039;t stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best&quot;

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That was a great piece of work right there :)  I would ask you to read some of my work but you probably won't like any of it due to the fact that it's all about guys. Well keep writing, you have talent.
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 6:04 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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Really? I hadn't noticed
salamander254 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 11:25 am
salamander254 BRONZE, Branford, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It is better to die on your feet than to live on your knees.&quot;<br /> -Che Guevara

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one thing ppl dont usually notice is that the first letter in each line spell out "War, its time"
salamander254 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 11:24 am
salamander254 BRONZE, Branford, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It is better to die on your feet than to live on your knees.&quot;<br /> -Che Guevara

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id love to comment on your work, and thank you
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:17 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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This is so true i really liked it:) would you mind commenting on my work?