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Drip, Drip, Drip Goes Love

April 25, 2010
By HurtTiger SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
HurtTiger SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes you gotta be cruel to be kind.<br /> No risk, no reward


Drip, drip, drip,
In thy soft waters, O Sea!
Amazed as my thoughts leave me speechless,
That day’s heart that is still in me.

And loved is the captain’s son,
With his wife and the two will embrace.
And loved is the captain himself,
As he sings of the kind not effaced.

And the ships will continue to pass,
Out of life and into the ground,
But O how I miss such a sound and a touch,
For it left to go where it was bound.

Drip, drip, drip,
My tears disappear in the Sea.
For it left with no choice and will never come back,
And turned my heart into debris.


The author's comments:
Model poem vased on Alfred Tennyson.
Based on love and loss.

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