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Denied An Easy Escape: Suicide

August 22, 2010
By I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
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I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
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&quot;Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible. &quot; ~ Cadet Maxim<br /> that&#039;s an awesome quote learn it, love it, live by it.

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You hope and think of a better tomorrow,
But there's no strength to get you through today,
You reach for the knife but it's too far away,
The pain of the day weighs down your feet,
So does all the expectations of others you know you will never meet,
You think you are not good enough,
You just want to give up,
You think your life has no meaning,
Your life and dreams slowly receding,
Another day in withdraw,
Thinking your life has no meaning at all,
You have been denied an easy escape.

© Virginia S., Duxbury, MA

The author's comments:
I've heard about people committing suicide, even talking about it. Just don't do it! It's not only you it will hurt.
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I_am_the_only_me GOLD said...
on Oct. 12 2010 at 11:41 pm
I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
15 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible. &quot; ~ Cadet Maxim<br /> that&#039;s an awesome quote learn it, love it, live by it.

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Thank you. You aren't alone, I wrote this about someone close to me. I am sure at least one time in everyone's life they think about it or at least go over why they aren't ever going to do it. Stay strong =]
bilbogirl GOLD said...
on Oct. 4 2010 at 6:36 pm
bilbogirl GOLD, Townsend, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
If you cant rock it, dont even bother trying.

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I myself am (or was) suicidal. This poem is very true. and so is your sidebar comment, you're not just hurting yourself. This is good :D I really like your username too :D
I_am_the_only_me GOLD said...
on Sep. 17 2010 at 1:08 am
I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
15 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible. &quot; ~ Cadet Maxim<br /> that&#039;s an awesome quote learn it, love it, live by it.

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If you read this please comment. I can't help writting an I wonder what people think about my poems. I an farely new to this site.