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Dream Trash (Bottomless Brown)

October 19, 2010
By IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Invisible trash
Collectors of glowing,
Immaterial

And broken winged
Orbs, blue and green, pink and pure,
Depending on the

Imagination.
Do deer, with liquid brown eyes,
Windows to wild and

Meek souls, dream of green
-er meadows, stronger legs, or
A world without man?

© Elana N., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
Something I was thinking about, this one is in extended (?) haiku form. I wrote another in poem form, but I don't know if I'll submit it or not.
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IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 26 2011 at 4:58 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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I really am starting to hate the title...
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 22 2011 at 4:29 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Thanks for the comment :)

Everyone has different tastes. 

SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 11:09 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 373 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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This was very... Interesting! I liked it, but the train of thought was difficult to follow. It's different than a lot of things I've read on here.
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 8 2011 at 11:24 am
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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It can be so hard to find suitable accompanying pictures, unfortunately. :( I guess you will just have to linger upon the imagery of the poem, instead :)
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 8 2011 at 11:20 am
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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That is high praise indeed, but higher still is the fact that you, yourself, like it, maybe even to the point of loving it.
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 8 2011 at 11:19 am
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Thank you very much, Aderes :)
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2011 at 9:06 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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This poem sounds like it could have been written by the poetic greats like Shakespeare, Sapphos,               Rainer Maria Rilke, Emily Dickinson...

THIS IS AWESOME! :) 

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2011 at 9:04 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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Such beautiful imagery! I wish your picture was more beautiful though. :( 

I enjoyed this poem too! 

IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 2 2011 at 7:31 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Thank you very much for your comment, Weaver :)

You are savoringly elequent, as always, friend.

Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 9 2011 at 8:08 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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"We are such stuff as dreams are made on." Forget Shakespeare. We know so little about the essence of dreams.

But you seem to know quite a lot. Well done...

Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 9 2011 at 8:05 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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A pleasantly startling reminder of your poetic brilliance, Stargirl. These lines were great material to take apart, look at curiously, shrug, then piece back together and smile in awe. I loved the last two stanzas especially.
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2010 at 9:39 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Mae Govannen, and I'm not sure I could actually stop.

Right back at you, Boo :)

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 1 2010 at 12:39 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

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freakin awesome. do your dance.