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Hugs in the Light, Kisses in the Day ( And I Don't Know Why)
She gives me hugs in the light,
And kisses in the day.
She loves hanging out,
Whenever there's is light.
I told her there will always be,
Because you're a star shining bright.
She loves hearing that I love her.
But hate it in the dark.
She doesn't like to be seen.
Where the sun don't shine,
And I don't know why.
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Um, just a bit confused...I think you mean that she won't 'do it' with you? And I'm not sure, but in some places you might have used the wrong form of punctuation. For example, "She doesn't like to be seen./Where the sun don't shine,"
Did you mean to have it be: "She doesn't like to be seen/Where the sun don't shine"? And I don't know what you mean by "But hate it in the dark." But I think that you were heading in a good direction with this, but just fix these errors (if they were errors) if they weren't, just make it more clear for the reader to understand. If you keep writing, you will get better, so Keep on Writing!!!:):):);)
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