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The Monster

December 14, 2010
By J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
19 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger


Sitting in darkness, waiting. waiting. waiting. Waiting for the thing they call the monster to come.
Sitting. sitting. sitting. Sitting alone.
They say the monster can destroy you.
Calling. calling. calling. Calling the thing they call the monster.
They say one dose will kill you, kill you on the inside that is.
Felling. feeling. feeling. Feeling the pain being injected in my body.
They say the pain of the monster will tare you apart.
Falling. falling. falling. Falling, into it's grasp.
They say the grasp of the monster will clamp to you like a letch and never let go.
Drowning. drowning. drowning. Drowning in the sorrow that floods with in you.
The sorrow of the monster will pull you down faster than a sun set.
Reaching. reaching. reaching. Reaching out for someone, anyone.
I made the mistake of playing with the monster.
Paying. paying. paying. Paying the price for my stupid choice.
Screaming. screaming. screaming. Screaming out but all they hear is slience, for I no longer have a voice.


The author's comments:
If you would like to know what the monster is message me and I will be happy to tell you, thanks for reading.

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J4Yc3 GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 4:40 pm
J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
19 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger

Thanks.

 


J4Yc3 GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 4:39 pm
J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
19 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger

I'm sorry I just now seen this comment. I am happy you can relate to this piece but I am sorry for the reasons of the relation.  I will deff check out your piece.

on Nov. 1 2011 at 4:30 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more<br /> had it but passed away<br /> as quietly as the day<br /> ebbs from the darkening star.<br /> <br /> <br /> -emanuel litvinoff

this is such a good description of the event

J4Yc3 GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 8:19 pm
J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
19 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
What doesn&#039;t kill you only makes you stronger

Thanks I try to make my poems my true feelings that people such as yourself can see in visions.

SamiLou SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 12:24 pm
SamiLou SILVER, Lee&#39s Summit, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Imagining the future is a kind of nostalgia&quot;<br /> -John Green (Looking For Alaska)

Ive notice that you often mention the voice in your poems, kind of like a motif in your collection. I feel like i can relate to this because i cut sometimes too. You should read my poem "You are..." in the wrters forum

Proof SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 11:16 am
Proof SILVER, Silver Spring, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
The world is yours you just have to take it

this is deep i felt lyk i could see this peice as a film

J4Yc3 GOLD said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 4:22 pm
J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
19 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
What doesn&#039;t kill you only makes you stronger

well, for me the monster was cutting

but for others that can relate it may be different