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Please Stay.
July 28, 2011
He said I like you, I said I did too,
We talked for hours even though there were things to do,
He said you’re amazing and so beautiful too,
I was so happy I didn’t know what to do,
He said I liked you so long, Im sorry I waited,
We know now I stated,
A couple days later he said,
Something I will forever dread,
I’m deciding to maybe move in with my dad,
This makes not just me but his mom sad,
Now you’re a million miles away,
And we both don’t know what to say,
I feel like you pushed me away,
Please tell me you’ll stay.
© Jamie U., West Hempstead, NY
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NathanBHooker GOLD said...
on Aug. 7 2011 at 4:11 pm
Awesome, loved it. It seemed filled with emotion, great job.
toriroxsoutloud BRONZE said...
on Aug. 7 2011 at 1:32 pm
thank you!
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 7 2011 at 2:56 am
There are parts where you should have put quotation marks. On the fifth line, Im should be I'm. Other than that, I like this poem. Keep writing and then, everything will be perfect! :))
toriroxsoutloud BRONZE said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 11:08 am
thank you ! (:
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