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Blood of Tears
October 8, 2011
She ran,
The night, dark,
Closing in around her
Everything was wrong,
Nothing made sense
He loved her,
What had she done,
How could he
Treat
Her like she
Was nothing?
She slowed
Stairs coming into view
She sat
On the steps,
Head
In her hands
Crying, confused
As blood dripped
Onto
The pavement
© Martha V., Morton Grove, IL
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kingofwriters BRONZE said...
on Nov. 8 2011 at 5:34 pm
I'm kind of wondering why you put only one word on some of the lines, but that's one of the only drawbacks to this poem. Even though you didn't use a lot of good descriptive words and writing techniques that could help improve your writing, I still liked it a lot!
Keep up the good work! :)
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