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In a Parallel Universe

October 3, 2011
By Naomi518 GOLD, Windsor, Connecticut
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Naomi518 GOLD, Windsor, Connecticut
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"Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light" ~Albus Dumbledore

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In a parallel universe
Black would be white
Wrong would be right
Up would be down
Square would be round

In a parallel universe
Yes would be no
Stop would be go
More would be less
Worst would be best

In a parallel universe
Hot would be cold
Dirt would be gold
Short would be tall
Big would be small

In a parallel universe
You would be mine
and I would be yours

© Marissa M., Rockford, MI

The author's comments:
I usually hate cheesy poems that rhyme but I couldn't sleep one night and wrote this at like 2AM
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Eshshah PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 5:34 am
Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
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I like it- it's simple and sweet.
Naomi518 GOLD said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 10:16 pm
Naomi518 GOLD, Windsor, Connecticut
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"Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light" ~Albus Dumbledore

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haha thanks! I wrote this a few months ago at like 2 AM and never bothered editing it. Thanks for the advice! :)
lilmartz PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 4:10 pm
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
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Wow. This. was. amazing! I love how you were able to make this all rhyme! The only critique I have for you is to expand on the last stanza please! As a reader, I feel like it ended too early and I noticed the two lines missing in the last stanza. Other than that, nice work! (by the way, the cheesiness worked here)