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February 2, 2012
By Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
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Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\&quot;<br /> ~Robert Frost<br /> <br /> \&quot;Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\&quot;<br /> ~Edgar Allan Poe

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if there were such things as angels
He'd be mine.
Hair as golden as rolling fields
Skin as glowing as candle light
Teeth that are as white as the purest snow,
and if he had wings, they'd be a creamy white.
My angel has a heart as big as a whale
and his soul makes the sun seem dim.
My angel, my angel
as sweet as can be
My angel, my angel
come be with me

© Raul R., Monte Vista, CO

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Just a little something I whipped up, I hope you enjoy it
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ZhadaMone GOLD said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 2:35 pm
ZhadaMone GOLD, Westwood, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love you as much as I did yesterday but, not as much as I will tommorow&quot;

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This was really good. Keep writing, never stop. :)
callmeike SILVER said...
on Mar. 21 2012 at 10:54 pm
callmeike SILVER, Denver, Colorado
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Heroes die, Legends endure.

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This is very well written. I'm not much of a poetry reader but I love what you did. You kept it short very detailed that painted a picture in my head of the angel. Well done! I hope to see more from you :)
holyblondecheerleaderbatman BRONZE said...
on Mar. 21 2012 at 10:23 pm
holyblondecheerleaderbatman BRONZE, Wasilla, Alaska
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Who said I want to fit in ?

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really cute poem i love it!!!!!!!!

 

Shadowfoxz DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 14 2012 at 7:35 pm
Shadowfoxz DIAMOND, Washington D.C, District Of Columbia
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I have new work coming out every week. Yaay.

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Really cute poem. Idealism makes the title very fitting :)
Joshua. GOLD said...
on Mar. 13 2012 at 10:03 pm
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
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&quot;So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?&quot; - Hunter S Tompson

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Good Stuff :)
JesusFreak3 SILVER said...
on Mar. 5 2012 at 10:18 pm
JesusFreak3 SILVER, Highlands Ranch, Colorado
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&quot;When everything around me falls to pieces, I&#039;ve got something more in my life. When I&#039;m broken only God completes me.&quot;<br /> Krystal Meyers<br /> &quot;God is love&quot;<br /> --Bible<br /> &quot;An eye for an eye makes everyone blind.&quot;<br /> --Gandhi

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awww! that's really sweet and I like your word choice :-)
lvamp1192 SILVER said...
on Mar. 2 2012 at 6:09 pm
lvamp1192 SILVER, Schuylerville, New York
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&quot;Nothing is Trivial...&quot;<br /> -Brandon Lee

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really good u really wanted the writer and the angel to be united in the end....have them come together and everything be perfect :)
Angelgirl39 GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2012 at 11:09 am
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\&quot;<br /> ~Robert Frost<br /> <br /> \&quot;Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\&quot;<br /> ~Edgar Allan Poe

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Jealous? Haha, im glad u liked the poem, B.
Shivam GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2012 at 9:34 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 87 comments

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Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

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great poem!!
Shivam GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2012 at 9:31 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 87 comments

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Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

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i wish i was that angel.....!!
Angelgirl39 GOLD said...
on Feb. 16 2012 at 10:09 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\&quot;<br /> ~Robert Frost<br /> <br /> \&quot;Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\&quot;<br /> ~Edgar Allan Poe

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thank you so much Fire!
Mantequilla SILVER said...
on Feb. 16 2012 at 9:27 pm
Mantequilla SILVER, Eagan, Minnesota
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5/5 Fo shizzle. Nicely done.
Angelgirl39 GOLD said...
on Feb. 12 2012 at 8:07 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\&quot;<br /> ~Robert Frost<br /> <br /> \&quot;Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\&quot;<br /> ~Edgar Allan Poe

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thanks ash, it means a lot
-Ash- SILVER said...
on Feb. 12 2012 at 8:05 pm
-Ash- SILVER, Redmond, Washington
7 articles 4 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
She wants to die. She wants to disappear, to be remembered no more. She wants so terribly to be forgotten, all her mistakes, all her failures, everything. Her name to be wiped free from all record of existence. Because is it really existing when you&rsquo;ve got nothing to show for your life?

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this is soooo good! its amazing! 5/5 :D