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Loosing Someone You Love.

February 6, 2012
By Ashleyy1213 GOLD, CHICAGO, Illinois
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Wishing, hoping, and wanting you here.
Why did you go?
Why up there?
You were my best friend,
everything i had.
Now your gone,
makes me so sad.
You had such a great personality.
You made me laugh,
you made me smile,
people from every where, could see it for miles.
You were my love,
My little weenie,
please come back, don't leave me.
I know your looking down and saying "don't cry",
but how is it possible when your gone, and its no lie.
I miss my Antonio, and thats it.
Why couldnt god spare your life?
why couldn't he give you one more chance?
One more time?
Guess your happy now,
and maybe its best.
I just wish you didn't leave like all the rest.
Your in my memories,
Your in my mind,
and you'll always be mine.

© Amanda L., Cumberland, MD

The author's comments:
This poem is about my bestfriend who had past away on christmas not to long ago. Forever he will stay in my heart. R.I.P Antonio.
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Ashleyy1213 GOLD said...
on May. 14 2012 at 5:27 pm
Ashleyy1213 GOLD, CHICAGO, Illinois
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thank you :)
DanielM SILVER said...
on May. 14 2012 at 5:26 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

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I liked it. It was really good. I can realte to this cause i've lost some people that i truly love so i totally realte to your poem. Great Job!!!
Ashleyy1213 GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2012 at 4:43 pm
Ashleyy1213 GOLD, CHICAGO, Illinois
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alright thank you so much. please check out my others TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/434769/Being-Me/
Ashleyy1213 GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2012 at 4:19 pm
Ashleyy1213 GOLD, CHICAGO, Illinois
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alright thanks
Ashleyy1213 GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2012 at 4:17 pm
Ashleyy1213 GOLD, CHICAGO, Illinois
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thanks everyone. i try though. im new at writing, and i have more feelings when im angry or upset. and usually my poems are sad and depressing, this ones about my friend so thank you very much.
Writer_Jordan GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 6:23 pm
Writer_Jordan GOLD, Ellicott City, Maryland
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All that is gold does not glitter,<br /> Not all those who wander are lost;<br /> The old that is strong does not wither,<br /> Deep roots are not reached by the frost.<br /> From the ashes a fire shall be woken,<br /> A light from the shadows shall spring;<br /> Renewed shall be blade that was broken,<br /> The crownless again shall be king.

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Cute? I thought it was rather moving, after reading it several times. For some reason the last few phrases struck a chord. Make sure when you are writing you are you put you're not your
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 4:10 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
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\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Very cute, but it could be better. A description and a simile or two would make it flow more nicely. I am truly sorry for your loss though :( stay strong!
Swims.M.V. said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 1:49 pm
I could tell what you were going for but I think your words were talking not the feelings in your heart. nice job and sorry bout your friend.