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Lovely colors

June 28, 2012
By justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.


Love is not black and white,
Love is blue bird that takes flight
Love is in a red heart beating
It is the brown gravel road leading

Love is like a pink rose,
How tall will the green stem grow no one knows
Love can be found in a purple butterfly,
But be broken because of a white lie.

Love is like a silver sword
It slays people when it is bored
Love can be a black hole
It can be like being hit with coal

Sometimes love is bright
Like the sun's yellow light
Misused love some can't bare it
Its the taste of a rotten orange carrot.

Hey what do you know,
Love can be used with every color of the rainbow.



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on Aug. 4 2013 at 8:07 pm
SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
25 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;What does not kill you makes you stronger!&quot; or<br /> &quot;Your only limits are the ones you set on yourself&quot; Love doesn&#039;t bring happiness, happiness can just happens to be found easier where there is love-- Sam

grrrr....similes my mortal enemy try to use a metaphor if you can they can be harder to come up with but show you as a more serious or a classy writer

on Feb. 25 2013 at 11:39 am
Little_Miss_Jo_ BRONZE, Johnston, Iowa
4 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
The greatest weakness of most humans is their hesitancy to tell others how much they love them while they&#039;re alive

Really creative how you found a way to relate it to every color!! I like the ending, good job! :)

justme242 GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2012 at 8:07 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

thnx

 


Johnny99 GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2012 at 7:43 pm
Johnny99 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
19 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
A rose and a flame, are just the same.

I love how you came around to say it's the colors of the rainbow. A great poem, all in all.

on Jul. 17 2012 at 12:26 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
11 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live like there&#039;s no tommorow

Love it! The rhyming adds a lot to it, but its not cheesey! 

necci SILVER said...
on Jul. 10 2012 at 4:48 pm
necci SILVER, Denver, Colorado
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Women are many things to humans, but the one thing they are not is dominated by men.<br /> -If a single act of hate can do so much damage, what can a single act of kindness do?

amazing very well written

secretholder said...
on Jul. 8 2012 at 11:48 am
very good poem, i like it alot . my favorite thing about it is the use of colors , to me colors can portray any mood or feeling. i truely love this!

justme242 GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2012 at 10:35 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

thnx so much i love to see people commenting on it 

 


justme242 GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2012 at 10:34 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

thnx!!! its great to hear people like it 

 


justme242 GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2012 at 10:32 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

thnx

 


on Jul. 7 2012 at 10:27 pm
bethanyvreeve SILVER, Nanuet, New York
7 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have a voice too and for better or for worse, mine is a voice that cannot be silenced.

I love this line:

Love is like a silver sword
It slays people when it is bored

Very creative!


on Jul. 7 2012 at 10:26 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win&quot;- Stephen King<br /> &ldquo;In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate&rdquo;- Isaac Asimov

it sounds like a song on the radio really well done!:)

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2012 at 9:11 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

Your a really good poet. This was awesome poem. I really liked your message and how you compared love to different stuff. Great Job. Suggestion maybe end with a hook at the end of your poem.

justme242 GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2012 at 4:01 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

thank you so much

justme242 GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2012 at 4:00 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

thank you so much

on Jul. 2 2012 at 1:30 pm
Hayley567 BRONZE, Columbus, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
to never see things in the eyes of a writer, will never be fully seen.

as other comments have said it is a creative flow. i hope you create more you are very great at poetry

on Jul. 2 2012 at 12:12 pm
manda_the_random_poet PLATINUM, Elfrida, Arizona
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Very great symbolism and flow here. I enjoy the idea you are portraying and have a special kind of writing. Keep it up. Hope you post more.