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Rain Puddles

October 14, 2013
By ovomarisa BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
ovomarisa BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Our greatest weakness lies in giving up. The most certain way to succeed is always to try just one more time." -Thomas A. Edison


The soft pulverizing sound of thunder from afar.
Boisterous soft rain crawling down my window,
As the raindrops race to the bottom,
Building a puddle on the windowpane,
Rushing off onto the porch floor like a waterfall.

Aluminizing dark sky as lightning pummels ahead, lighting up the entire sky.
Stillness of the rain as it starts to soothe down.
Hushed breeze from the smooth moving trees.
Stable roll of the leaves as they run across the ground.
Soft banging of wind chimes as they rattle together in the distance,
The gradual, fast gust as the wind maneuvers it.
Soaring of rain puddles in the air as cars accelerate through them.


The author's comments:
Comfortable rainy days

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on Oct. 29 2013 at 8:32 am
AlinaPerez23 BRONZE, Ohio, Michigan
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I love your work it is very insiring!!