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Do You Not See

October 25, 2008
By carriebearieforever GOLD, Mcallen, Texas
carriebearieforever GOLD, Mcallen, Texas
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Do you not see how much you hurt me when you tell me I'm nothing?
Do you not see the shine in my eyes when you say I'm your one and only?
Do you not see my bruised arm after your angry?
Do you not see how happy I am when you wisper sweet things in my ear?
Do you not see the pain I go through to make you smile?
Do you not see the weight lifted off my shoulder when you smile?
Do you not see how much I cry when you yell?
Do you not see how happy I am when you hug me?
Do you not see how deep your volgar words cut me?
Do you not see how your kisses sew them back up?
Do you not see how good I am to you when you surely don't deserve it...I guess you don't.



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on Jun. 12 2009 at 11:22 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

I really like this piece. It's as if each line is contradicting the other; stating the negative, then the positive. I love it. Great job!