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You Are My Home
November 12, 2008
Walking in a paradise
Why does this hurt?
Because the paradise you left me in
Isn’t perfect without you.
It’s an empty desert,
Nothing near or far.
May I write this poem?
And perhaps one day
An archeologist will find it
And wish my soul a peaceful exeunt.
But for now, I will suffer.
Maybe an individual will come and rescue me.
But I doubt it.
I wait, as nothing goes according to plan.
Leave and take your peace,
But I will gradually grow insane
Then I won’t be able to tell the difference
Between you and pain.
© Brianna D., Everson, WA
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This article has 5 comments.
aMAEzing said...
on Dec. 15 2008 at 9:58 pm
this poem is very emotional, and expresses its meaning very clearly. excellent!
TheWriterNextDoor said...
on Dec. 3 2008 at 1:15 am
Wow, this is really amazing! I can feel the pain that was written out in this poem.
The Writer from Above said...
on Dec. 1 2008 at 9:01 pm
*rolls eyes* What are you doing on here Lauren?
dara's cousin said...
on Dec. 1 2008 at 2:18 am
i love this poem the wording is great!! (do i sound like a poet?) *****laurennnnn!!****
danielh60 said...
on Nov. 22 2008 at 5:33 am
The poem explain feelings. I like the poem. I give the poems all stars. Daniel
