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The End

March 25, 2014
By TheOceansBlackBird SILVER, Richmond, California
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TheOceansBlackBird SILVER, Richmond, California
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One persons craziness is another persons reality<br /> -Tim Burton<br /> <br /> and then there&#039;s this one<br /> ╭&cap;╮（︶︿︶）╭&cap;╮

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Of all the thoughs rushing through my head,
The most pronounced is I'm numb and dead,
I don't think I could feel anymore,
Should I plummet to the depths of the raging shore?
Maybe the shock would clear my mind,
And yet again... what would I find?
Perhapse the reason behind my sorrow,
Another reason to live tommorrow?
The reason all smiles and laughs are fake?
And people, from dreams, never do wake?
No... Even real answers couldn't help me,
Not even a book and a warm cup of tea,
I need someone to really understand who I am,
But not even I know that.. So this must be the end.

© Kaitlin B., Norwell, MA

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EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 31 2014 at 2:04 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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This is amazingly written. Full of depth, raw emotion, and descriptiveness. It's beautiful. I can connect to it. And I know sometimes it feel like its the end, but it isn't. It isn't the end yet, there will be a the end, but it's not a the end. Just wanted to tell you that. Thank for sharing this! ^_^
WickedDreamer PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 12 2014 at 2:10 am
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
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The legacy you leave is the one you live

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This is so real. I can really relate to it. Keep writing
malloryryan07 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 9 2014 at 8:45 pm
malloryryan07 BRONZE, Brookwood, Alabama
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That is so realistic. Great poem.
wooldhoot GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2014 at 12:22 pm
wooldhoot GOLD, Longmont, Colorado
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&quot;Read any good books lately?&quot;<br /> ~Linlee<br /> <br /> &quot;:D&quot;<br /> ~Owen

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I've had that happen before. :P Totally understand.
tzuzan BRONZE said...
on Apr. 15 2014 at 1:49 am
tzuzan BRONZE, Thrissur, Other
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i really liked the way you percieve reality....loved it
TheOceansBlackBird SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2014 at 8:29 pm
TheOceansBlackBird SILVER, Richmond, California
9 articles 14 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
One persons craziness is another persons reality<br /> -Tim Burton<br /> <br /> and then there&#039;s this one<br /> ╭&cap;╮（︶︿︶）╭&cap;╮

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Yeah I realized my mistake after it had already been accepted, and i didnt feel like having to go through the whole process again...but thanks to everyone who's commented! It really means alot.
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Apr. 14 2014 at 8:10 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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Wow I love this! Well written!
TheUniverse said...
on Apr. 14 2014 at 7:57 pm
TheUniverse, Everywhere,, Other
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Exercise to stimulate, not to annihilate. The world wasn&#039;t formed in a day, and neither were we. Set small goals and build upon them.

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Its an extremely well written piece and I love it!!!  Keep up the great writing!!!!
JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 13 2014 at 8:43 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
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&quot;If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, &#039;I just don&#039;t care.&#039;?&quot;

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I like the meaning behind your words - especially the ending, A lot of people I feel like an relate to this, great job! :)
wooldhoot GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2014 at 7:58 pm
wooldhoot GOLD, Longmont, Colorado
11 articles 0 photos 18 comments

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&quot;Read any good books lately?&quot;<br /> ~Linlee<br /> <br /> &quot;:D&quot;<br /> ~Owen

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I like the poem a lot! Just, it's "perhaps" not "perhapse."