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He's My Better Half

April 23, 2014
By Maria16 BRONZE, Chander, Arizona
Maria16 BRONZE, Chander, Arizona
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He makes me smile when I cry
He kisses all my hurt goodbye
He's my one and only guy
He takes my sad away
He is my happy day
He makes me laugh
YEAH that's right, He's my better half

We watched him suffer
We watched him fade away
Our hearts were breaking as he fought so hard to stay
We saw him sleeping, so peaceful, free of pain
It broke our hearts to loose him, it seemed so UNFIAR

Even though you're leaving
Even though you're going away
I'll be right here thinking of you
Wondering how it would be
If you had stayed here with me



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on May. 5 2014 at 6:12 pm
Damianna3 BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
If we are born to die and we all die to live then whats the point in living life if it just contradicts- Falling in Reverse (Ronnie Radke)

Your poem was very touching. 

on May. 5 2014 at 6:02 pm
Vallythehylian BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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This is great! 

on May. 5 2014 at 5:49 pm
Zaboomafoo BRONZE, Goodyear, Arizona
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"The only truth is that there are no absolute truths."

much amaze

on May. 5 2014 at 5:47 pm
shawnacee smith BRONZE, Pheonix, Arizona
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ZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN!!! Gurl this is like a maze ball!!!

on May. 5 2014 at 5:46 pm
Zaboomafoo BRONZE, Goodyear, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"The only truth is that there are no absolute truths."

This is so beautiful and relateable to many people.

on May. 5 2014 at 5:44 pm
Yasmine Porras BRONZE, Az, Arizona
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Ohhhhh Dang you be famous already and your such a good writer keep writing and you will insprire everyone with your amazing poems keep up the good work!!!!!!! <3 Yasmine 

on May. 5 2014 at 5:41 pm
doesmesswithme101 BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
If its not important you don&#039;t have to get up!

you be like what and i be like awesome

on May. 5 2014 at 5:40 pm
Kyle Sandidge BRONZE, Avondale, Arizona
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so perf like 4 reel