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Camouflage

June 22, 2015
By Natalieee2533 SILVER, Hubbard, Minnesota
Natalieee2533 SILVER, Hubbard, Minnesota
6 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyday every hour turn that pain into power<3


Can't hide away

Amongst fake smiles, and shattered promises

make me an animal,make me natural

Only to be told I am so admirable

Unfortunately my hands still shook

Fumbling to free myself from being a certain way

Let me fly away

Away from the looks

Gazing away in your eyes and to say

Everything is ok tommorow the sun will rise anyway.


The author's comments:

my grammar stinks but please comment!


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on Oct. 25 2015 at 5:40 pm
wolfvomit PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
25 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
“don’t fall slave to the serpent’s tongue”

Did you mean to say "away or way" that many times? This is a form of ineffective repetition. Your readers will loose interest in your work if they don't find a consistent point of repetition. This was great, but it needs to go through the wringer again.