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The Sunlight of My Eye

September 8, 2017
By WhiteNoise PLATINUM, Easley, South Carolina
WhiteNoise PLATINUM, Easley, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My name is Jeff!!"


You want something nice, peaceful
All smiles, so gleeful
The sun shines bright
Beautiful sunlight
It feels good on my skin
Happiness like this feels so foreign
Bees buzz, flowers bloom
The lowly caterpillar, in its cocoon
I love the sun’s rays
Don’t go away
Don’t leave me in the night
Shower me in light
As the weed takes hold
Sunlight, pure and gold
I’m happy, I feel great
September 6, it’s on this date
That I am happy
Don’t feel crappy
The sun is out, the wind blows
The light inside of me finally shows
You can see the young man I am to be
This is me in all actuality
So go. Cheers! Raise your glass to the sky
A toast to the newfound light in my eyes
Things are looking up from here
Like a shade pulled away, my sight is clear
No more pain, no more lies
Here’s to hoping the light never dies.


The author's comments:

Things are getting better. Heres a treat to those who wanted a happy poem. The dark ones arent going anywhere tho.


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on Oct. 18 2017 at 11:31 pm
WhiteNoise PLATINUM, Easley, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My name is Jeff!!"

cool imma check em out

on Oct. 18 2017 at 6:19 pm
FluffyPanda427 BRONZE, Olympia, Washington
1 article 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Rase you words not your voice. It is the rain that grows flowers, not thunder."

Finally got some poems published!

on Oct. 18 2017 at 5:04 pm
FluffyPanda427 BRONZE, Olympia, Washington
1 article 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Rase you words not your voice. It is the rain that grows flowers, not thunder."

Didn't have time to write in class it was assignment after assignment sadly i had no free time.

on Oct. 18 2017 at 10:08 am
WhiteNoise PLATINUM, Easley, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My name is Jeff!!"

Yeah go for it! if you get bored do it in class. lol thats what i do

on Oct. 18 2017 at 10:03 am
FluffyPanda427 BRONZE, Olympia, Washington
1 article 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Rase you words not your voice. It is the rain that grows flowers, not thunder."

Ugh school here we go again...Im going to try to write a poem after school!

on Oct. 17 2017 at 9:21 pm
WhiteNoise PLATINUM, Easley, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My name is Jeff!!"

Dont rush it. let it come to you, no matter how long it takes

on Oct. 17 2017 at 5:53 pm
FluffyPanda427 BRONZE, Olympia, Washington
1 article 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Rase you words not your voice. It is the rain that grows flowers, not thunder."

You do write a lot it takes me like a whole day to think of one line. Lol

on Oct. 17 2017 at 10:43 am
WhiteNoise PLATINUM, Easley, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My name is Jeff!!"

Its very appreciated. I get on sometimes during class to see if anyone commented, so i welcome your comments. I will make one for you. give me a few, I have already finished two poems today, and thats before noon lol. I write a lot. keep an eye out

on Oct. 17 2017 at 10:04 am
FluffyPanda427 BRONZE, Olympia, Washington
1 article 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Rase you words not your voice. It is the rain that grows flowers, not thunder."

K good because i have been commenting on your poems a lot....and you may be thinking will she ever go away XD

on Oct. 17 2017 at 12:27 am
WhiteNoise PLATINUM, Easley, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My name is Jeff!!"

Its not that I don't like happy, i just dont know happiness well. i write what is familiar to me, and that happens to be darkness, sadness. But i got you. give me a week or two so teenink can process them, and i will see what i can do. its not annoying at all.

on Oct. 15 2017 at 10:18 pm
FluffyPanda427 BRONZE, Olympia, Washington
1 article 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Rase you words not your voice. It is the rain that grows flowers, not thunder."

Sorry am i being annoying to you i realize i talk a lot and go off subject. You know what would be cool is to pet a giant big fat fluffy panda. I would cuddle it... :) lol XD

on Oct. 15 2017 at 10:11 pm
FluffyPanda427 BRONZE, Olympia, Washington
1 article 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Rase you words not your voice. It is the rain that grows flowers, not thunder."

Do not like happy poems? If you don't want happy then write about all the shooting and terrorist attacks. That's sad :(

on Oct. 15 2017 at 10:09 pm
FluffyPanda427 BRONZE, Olympia, Washington
1 article 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Rase you words not your voice. It is the rain that grows flowers, not thunder."

Something happy i can give you an example hmm...oh i got one unicorns that poop rainbow THAT IS SO HAPPY!!!!

on Oct. 15 2017 at 9:40 pm
WhiteNoise PLATINUM, Easley, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My name is Jeff!!"

Again? Ig i can make that work

on Oct. 15 2017 at 8:15 pm
FluffyPanda427 BRONZE, Olympia, Washington
1 article 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Rase you words not your voice. It is the rain that grows flowers, not thunder."

This is going to be hard to think about a topic because there is so many. Since i cant think of anything XD write about something that makes you HAPPYYY! :D

on Oct. 15 2017 at 12:38 am
WhiteNoise PLATINUM, Easley, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My name is Jeff!!"

@FluffyPanda427

on Oct. 15 2017 at 12:37 am
WhiteNoise PLATINUM, Easley, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My name is Jeff!!"

It just flows from me. I get a rhyme or a theme and just go for it. If you would like, you can give me a topic here in the comments, and I can write a poem for you on that topic, and title it with your username.

on Oct. 13 2017 at 5:47 pm
FluffyPanda427 BRONZE, Olympia, Washington
1 article 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Rase you words not your voice. It is the rain that grows flowers, not thunder."

HOW ARE YOU SO GOOD AT POETRY?