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Faded Innocence

January 29, 2010
By Ms.writeoutloud SILVER, Lemoore, California
Ms.writeoutloud SILVER, Lemoore, California
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Favorite Quote:
She wanders through the sea of stars,<br /> drowning in the silence,<br /> asking questions, untold answers,<br /> searching for reliance.


smiling hearts and blinded blue eyes
turn away from thunder outside.
hide under cotton sheets, stay with me awhile.
as innocence fades, so does your smile.
reality rains through shattered windows, but ignorance is bliss.
of all these things, what are you sure to miss?

calloused hearts and blank blue eyes
turn away from thunder outside.
stand beside me, hold my hand.
all grown up, but you don't understand:
reality collects in puddles deep enough to drown in.
now that we're done, can we begin?


The author's comments:
I wrote this after ending things with my first and only love. Its about coping, growing up, and ultimately moving forward.

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on Dec. 13 2011 at 6:23 pm
MusicBabyDoll13 BRONZE, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
--Judge me &amp; I&#039;ll prove you wrong. Tell me what to do &amp; I&#039;ll tell you off. Say I&#039;m not worth it &amp; watch where I end up.

this. is. amazing. That is really the ONLY thing i can say cuz there aren't words for this! =)

on Feb. 14 2010 at 12:27 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

this is great! i can easily relate to everything. i love how smoothly this poem read :) the rhythm was amazing. all around, this is an amazing piece ;) 5 stars! check out some of my work if you could, id love your opinion. keep writing! ;)