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Life After You

October 9, 2010
By deafening_silence SILVER, Miami, Florida
deafening_silence SILVER, Miami, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent" -Elenor Roosevelt


The hardest part of this
Is leaving you
We will part
No matter what i do

I wonder what it'll be like
On the other side
The world I'll witness
After we say goodbye

What life will feel like
After we part
The rush of feelings
I'll get from the start

I can't imagine
Not hearing music with you
Hearing songs whose lyrics
Have no memories to move to

I don't know what I'll do
What i will write for
When separate ways we go
And you cross the door

I'll tell you what I held back
The words that i've always wanted to say
When I tell you I love you
That'll be the day

I don't want to go
But I know it will come
So I'll tell you truth
Maybe it'll only hurt some


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on Oct. 21 2010 at 4:53 pm
deafening_silence SILVER, Miami, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent" -Elenor Roosevelt

Thank you :) I cried as I wrote it! But thanks, this is the first time I ever show my poems to people other than my friends, it means alot. I'll definitely look at your poems! :)

jasso GOLD said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 11:55 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
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Favorite Quote:
courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

OMG just got of a relationship it is

like ( NO COMMENT)!!

plz check my worck


on Oct. 19 2010 at 7:15 am
singingdetective SILVER, Sugar Land, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Out of a world of laughter, <br /> suddenly I am sad.<br /> Day and night, it haunts me,<br /> the kiss I never had&quot;<br /> --Midsummer by Syndey King Russell<br /> <br /> &quot;Chances lost are hope&#039;s torn up pages&quot;-- &quot;Chances&quot; by Five for Fighting

awww... this makes me cry... :''''( Anyone who has ever loved can understand this poem... I'm surprised that this poem hasn't gotten any more attention... This is a very lovely and impactful poem. The emotions running through it are very clear and descriptive: "I can't not hearing music with you, Hearing songs whose lyrics have no memories to move to". That's my favorite line... Well, Idk, all of this is fantastic, lol. WONDERFUL JOB! :D

This reminds me of some of my poems. If any of them get published soon, please read and comment. :)