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I Went Walking

June 25, 2011
By Anonymous

When I went walking, I followed my feet
On to the end of the end of the street
Following that, I walked on some more,
Finding my feet at a far-distant shore.

Not at all hindered by the ocean’s vast size,
I decided continuing would be most wise.
So I followed my feet, footsteps trailing behind,
Up to my ears in green-and-blue brine.

Though I’d now lost my hold on the floor of the sea,
It presented no real sort of challenge for me.
I swam for a while at rather good pace,
The sky and the sea closing in on my face.

And so this went on, for a week or so more,
‘Til my feet once again touched a far-distant shore.
Pleased at my progress, I then left the sea,
My footsteps emerging quite soon after me.

I walked on, I walked on, I saw cities and towns
I followed my feet, which followed the ground.
I saw marvelous things that I’d try to describe,
But I haven’t the words. Or the space. Or the time.

Over many a country I wandered, you know,
Never quite sure of where next I would go.
But I always kept on, wondering too
Where I would end up when my journey was through.

On the twenty-eighth week (and a few days besides),
I followed my feet to a soft, lapping tide.
My footsteps behind me, I jumped in once more
And swam for a month to the opposite shore.

And when I touched land, why, I kept going on!
Over mountain and valley, through evening and dawn.
Where was I going? I couldn’t have bet,
But wherever it was, well, I wasn’t there yet.

But then as I rounded the crest of a hill,
I saw something familiar and quiet and still.
I ran down to meet it, I followed my feet,
And soon recognized my own house, my own street.

And there in the dirt, and there, in my yard,
Were somebody’s footsteps, weathered and hard.
I stepped in them, wondering whose they could be,
And I stopped, and I noticed they belonged to me.

My feet would not walk; my prize had been won.
I’d gone clear round the earth, and my journey was done.
Happy like that, I stayed there, quite fulfilled:
I’d done enough traveling. I’m standing there still.


The author's comments:
A little poem I wrote about a fictitious walk. Personally, I think it's kinda got a Dr Seuss feel to it.

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on Aug. 2 2011 at 1:58 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything&#039;s a triangle.&quot; ~ My mother<br /> <br /> &quot;Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it&#039;s the easiest way to be heard.&quot;

You just have so much writing talent. Seriously, how do you come up with this stuff. And I completely agree with the whole Dr. Seuss style. It deifinitely has that ring to it. Very, very well done. Every journey should be fulfilling. :)

on Jul. 18 2011 at 2:41 pm

When  I'm a supermodel and you're an acclaimed and envied author, I hope you remember me. Haha! 

The poem is beautiful. Articulate. Eloquent. Impeccable. Momentous. Drastic. And yet, simple, because it has an almost childish pleasure to it.

On a serious note, this is flawless. I still can scarcely believe you have only recently been discovered. This writing and wording that flows from your soul is a true gift, Jad. I hope you make good use of it, for it may take you far! 


on Jul. 12 2011 at 2:32 pm
pencilsFORhands SILVER, Boston, Massachusetts
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I really like it, nice rhythm

on Jul. 9 2011 at 4:51 am
Writomania PLATINUM, New Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;What really does not kill you, will only make you stronger&quot;- Kanye West<br /> &quot;If there was no electricity, we would&#039;ve had to watch the television by candle light&quot;- Joe Jonas<br /> Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There&#039;s just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

You take my word for it girl.

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