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Who Am I?

December 4, 2011
By Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
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Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
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Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

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I shall tell you a riddle
about a young girl
who has an interesting story to tell.
Here it is :

I am beautiful,
I am intelligent,
I am attractive.

I have talents,
I have friends,
I have family.

I have my downfalls,
I am not perfect,
I have made mistakes.

I will never know what would have happened,
I will not always make the right decision,
But I will always be me.

Who am I?

I am every girl in the world,
I am every girl who dislikes herself,
I am every girl who thinks she is useless.

I am wrong about those things,
because I am loved
and I am me.

© Tiffany A., Southaven, MS

The author's comments:
I'm not the most confident person in th world either. My self-esteem isn't that high.
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Neytiri GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2012 at 11:44 am
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

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Thanks!! That means a lot!!
Joshua. GOLD said...
on Mar. 8 2012 at 3:14 pm
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
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"So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?" - Hunter S Tompson

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Beautiful! I like it a lot! :)
Neytiri GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 12:04 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
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Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

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Thanks honey!
Sarah.Ellis2014 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 11:59 am
Sarah.Ellis2014 BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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Amazing. There's no better way to even describe it:)