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Trees

October 7, 2014
By _darlingimbroken_ GOLD, Birmingham, Other
_darlingimbroken_ GOLD, Birmingham, Other
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The world a blur to most

Most see a tree as a tree

The day you actually see

When the world is not the same world

A tree is no longer a tree

A tree is something that bears fruite

A tree is something beautiful

Even in the harshest winds

A tree stands it's ground

A tree with leaves of magestic green

No longer just a tree

But a tree that is a work of art

That is the day you see the world

That is the day the world comes into focus

That is the day you truly see the tree



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on Mar. 18 2016 at 10:13 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

@_darlingimbroken_ , I would love to do that. I will do that when your story has uploaded. :) Also, you are welcome. I do enjoy your work very much. :)

on Mar. 18 2016 at 5:43 pm
_darlingimbroken_ GOLD, Birmingham, Other
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@Emma_rocks Thank you so much. :D

on Mar. 18 2016 at 5:43 pm
_darlingimbroken_ GOLD, Birmingham, Other
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@MissEmilyDickinson Thank you so much. This comment literally made me smile. I'm glad you are enjoying my work. Thank you so much for your kind words. I have submitted a short story this time but it has not been uploaded yet but when it uploads, I hope you can look at it and tell me what you think.

on Mar. 18 2016 at 5:41 pm
_darlingimbroken_ GOLD, Birmingham, Other
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@BlackNight15 I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. I have recently submitted a short story but it has not been uploaded yet. I hope you will check it out sometime. :p

on Mar. 18 2016 at 5:40 pm
_darlingimbroken_ GOLD, Birmingham, Other
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@staryskies I'm glad my poem helped you see that. :D

on Oct. 15 2014 at 4:42 am
staryskies GOLD, Siteki, Other
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Amazing, i definetly see a tree as more now. :) 

on Oct. 14 2014 at 7:09 am
lastingbreath16 DIAMOND, Lake Alfred, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
screw it all if life gives u lemons do what ever you feel the need to do with them.

You did awesome! This poem was beautiful!!!

on Oct. 13 2014 at 12:56 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

This is absolutely, beautiful and true. It has so much thought and depth and wonder and truth in it. And in way, to me, it can somehow, be used for our world too. I love this. :) You have such a talent and greatness in you. You're a wonderful and talented writer and person. It's true. :) Thank you so much, for sharing this. :) 

Starakk SILVER said...
on Oct. 13 2014 at 11:15 am
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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Good Work, Keep Writing.:)