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A part of my heart

October 28, 2014
By _darlingimbroken_ GOLD, Birmingham, Other
_darlingimbroken_ GOLD, Birmingham, Other
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I've made many wishes,

I've dreamt many dreams,

I've prayed many prayers,

I've talked to God,

And I've seen,

What I thought was love,

Come and go.

 

My hearts been broken,

More times than you know,

But I've kept the faith,

I've held on,

I believed that one day,

You would come alone;

My most perfect love,

The beginning of a fairytale,

That will live on and on.

 

You my love, will always be,

A part of my heart;

A part of me.



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on Mar. 31 2016 at 4:05 pm
_darlingimbroken_ GOLD, Birmingham, Other
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@Wordfreak Thank you so much. I'm very grateful for your comment and that you took the time to read my work.

on Mar. 28 2016 at 6:57 pm
Wordfreak SILVER, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;He who makes a beast out of himself gets rid of the pain of being a man.&quot; - Doc Johnson<br /> &quot;It&#039;s not the size of the dog in the fight. It&#039;s the size of the fight in the dog.&quot; -Ivan Moody, FFDP

This is a gorgeous poem. Very simple, and the rhythm and rhyme are not very elaborate. This simplicity adds to the effect the poem has. Good job, I look forward to reading more of your work. :)

on Mar. 22 2016 at 11:14 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

@_darlingimbroken_ , I look forward to reading your story. :) And I truly hope that more people, besides me, will take truly take the time to read your work. :)

on Mar. 22 2016 at 5:54 am
_darlingimbroken_ GOLD, Birmingham, Other
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@EmilytheBelleofA Thank you so much. Your comment makes me truly happy. I have wrote a short story too but it is still pending. I'm so happy that someone truly takes the time to read my work. I appreciate it a lot.

on Mar. 21 2016 at 2:07 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

This is beautiful. Your poem is just absolutely beautiful. This another writing of yours, that I can connect to also. Can connect to so much, especially the very last lines of your poem. You are absolutely such a beautiful and talented writer and person. Thank you so much for sharing this! Truly. I hope more people read your writings because you are a good and beautiful, talented writer and person.