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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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The-Grim-Reaper SILVER said...
on Apr. 22 2022 at 10:24 am
Jerk's response:
You are annoying,
I hate your face,
You come over,
you are always in my place.
You are like a pest,
always bugging on.
But your cute as well,
You love me I can tell.
I see it in your eyes,
but I can't bring myself,
to say goodbye.
You are a bug in my hair,
but I guess you can stay.
I like you by my side, anyways.
You are annoying,
I hate your face,
You come over,
you are always in my place.
You are like a pest,
always bugging on.
But your cute as well,
You love me I can tell.
I see it in your eyes,
but I can't bring myself,
to say goodbye.
You are a bug in my hair,
but I guess you can stay.
I like you by my side, anyways.
The-Grim-Reaper SILVER said...
on Apr. 22 2022 at 10:20 am
love your poem
GoPanthers1234 said...
on Dec. 14 2021 at 9:34 am
I like how the poem transitions from a loving tone to calling the guy a jerk and still describes how she loves him.
thepricety said...
on Dec. 13 2021 at 2:42 pm
I like the love-hate relationship theme, I believe it is very powerful.
Brady123456 said...
on Dec. 13 2021 at 2:40 pm
I like the way that the poet gives a clear description of how the guy looks. It makes you get a vision of what the boy looks like and acts like.
Sofia-Denice said...
on Dec. 13 2021 at 1:51 pm
I like how you used bold and sophisticated words followed by the word jerk. It added to the love-hate relationship you feel. Very well done.
eilabuuu said...
on Sep. 9 2020 at 10:09 am
Well done, this is beautiful.
katesharkey607 SILVER said...
on May. 22 2019 at 2:23 pm
I feel you!
Clovis2705 BRONZE said...
on May. 22 2019 at 8:54 am
omg this is actually me right now
lindseypeoples BRONZE said...
on Feb. 5 2019 at 1:39 pm
i love this! i love that although this poem relates to a situation you probably have // are going through, it also can relate to so many other people in relationships as well.
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