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Her Eyes

July 4, 2018
By Anonymous

I may fail if I try

to explain the color of her eye

Not blue.Not black

they are something just off-track.

It looks like a pair so rare

and is definitely beyond my wits to compare

 

Those eyes...

They brim with a childish innocence

leaving me to wonder about in silence.

They reveal a playful heart

and also a painful scar

They never hide the joy.Nor the sorrow

Nor the glee.Neither the grief

 

Those eyes...

They smile before her lips

They laugh before her mouth

They well up in an instant

Oh!An emotion that always leave me stunned.

Those eyes...

Its still a mystery what lays hidden

beneath those long eyelashes

Its a story of a strong woman

A story,of course, with no matches.

 

Those eyes...

They make her the most beautiful woman I have ever seen..


The author's comments:

Well.. I am an aspiring writer from India and this is my first ever post in this site.Waiting to hear from you..


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on Jul. 25 2018 at 3:36 pm
Rhiannon_4 DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both. <br /> - Native American proverb<br /> <br /> Do not go gentle into that good night but rage, rage against the dying of the light.<br /> - Dylan Thomas<br /> <br /> What is past is past -- it is the present and the future that concern us.<br /> - Hiawatha, founder of the Iroquois Confederacy

This is so beautiful! Great job, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!

karisuna GOLD said...
on Jul. 16 2018 at 2:49 pm
karisuna GOLD, Pinellas Park, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The flower that blooms in adversity is the most rare and beautiful of them all." -The Emperor, Mulan<br /> <br /> "Let go of anger, let go of pride, when you are bound by nothing, you go beyond sorrow." -Buddha

You're a talented writer!

on Jul. 12 2018 at 6:10 am
ashfromflames SILVER, Ernakulam, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Silly girl,<br /> your different was your beautiful<br /> all along<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Atticus

thank you all!!!

Pppp said...
on Jul. 11 2018 at 1:25 pm
Pppp, Ernakulam, Arizona
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Dayyyumm😍😍😍

Kes said...
on Jul. 11 2018 at 12:04 pm
Kes, Kochi, Other
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Let this be your stepping stone!
Looking forward for more

harrisroby said...
on Jul. 11 2018 at 11:55 am
harrisroby, Ernakulam, Other
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Ashley, you did it!!!

on Jul. 11 2018 at 10:53 am
imaginecrackers, Ernakulam, Other
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Ashleyyy ..this is really good.

nottellingu said...
on Jul. 11 2018 at 6:44 am
nottellingu, Xyz, Other
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Love it!