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Look me in the eyes

October 4, 2018
By KimberlyNPlascencia BRONZE, Tustin, California
KimberlyNPlascencia BRONZE, Tustin, California
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Look me in the eyes, tell me what you see

In your eyes, I see an ocean

One so calm, one capable of the greatest storms

An ocean I have been lost within

One that I choose to call home

Yet I know the longer I stay, the longer I stare

The longer I will drown

The deeper I will fall

A love that comes and goes

Crashes in a disguise of waves

A love that I am incapable of containing

Forever it’ll flow

Never to be controlled

I am washed ashore by the kindness of your soul

By the acts of letting me go

Forever, it’ll flow

Forever, no longer longing for its presence

It has captured every tear shed

From the pain within in disguise

I love you more than I will ever know


The author's comments:

This is to my first love. Aside from all the oain and tears, I see your face and remeber the tears of joy as well.


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Xochitl-A said...
on Oct. 30 2018 at 11:35 pm
Xochitl-A, Santa Ana, California
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Aww. This is such nice poem. It sounds so passionate.

NoemiTorres said...
on Oct. 30 2018 at 9:06 pm
NoemiTorres, Santa Ana, California
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Wow, this was so sad and sweet, keep writing you're wonderful!

Sammy101 said...
on Oct. 30 2018 at 2:48 pm
Sammy101, Santa Ana, California
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I love it! Truly sounds like it came from the heart! (:

natalie-2003 said...
on Oct. 30 2018 at 2:46 pm
natalie-2003, Santa Ana, California
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Your words made me cry... you saw me. Keep up the great work <3

CynthiaCase said...
on Oct. 30 2018 at 12:58 pm
CynthiaCase, Santa Ana, California
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Beautiful poem, Kimberly! I'm so proud of you!

Itzel_german said...
on Oct. 29 2018 at 10:29 am
Itzel_german, Tustin, California
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This is amazing congrats and good luck!