I actually disagree.  I don't believe that people are bad... sure, they definitely can do bad things... but what events in their lives have led them to be that way?  Many criminals have been abused in their past and end up in rotten situations because they didn't have anyone there for them... I am not justifying their actions, I'm just saying that they themselves are not bad.  There's still hope for them- someone just has to care enough for them to help them change.  And I do believe in angels and miracles... I see unbelievable events each day-like a blade of grass or a snowflake.  And you might think "wow, she's one of those people?"... but they are in fact miracles... the fact that we experience consciousness and life and see good, pure things is a miracle.  So, I pray that you'll be able to see this one day too... there's some truly awful things that go on in this world, yes, but there's also some very beautiful things that make life worthwhile... anything... be it a blue sky, a pink house or a smile.  And human beings, every human being no matter how many bad, bad things they've done, has value, and can be saved if only we'd care to think them worth saving.

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I love this! Keep on writing! I would love if you could comment on my work as well. Much appreciated.

i like it. its kind of lingering though, and some words rhyme where others don't. i really like it though

This is wonderful! I agree with you completely. I can't force myself to believe any of that about angels and miracles. And P.S. Eleanor Rigby is one of my favorite songs by the Beatles. The key line there is "No-one was saved." Not even Father McKenzie or Eleanor Rigby, who both spent all of their time dedicated to the church. Excellent. I think I agree with you on many topics.

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