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Daffodils At Dawn
July 28, 2021
Oh! Daffodils at dawn, planted on my
neatly trimmed lawn.
As quite as a fawn .....
Like a pawn on a chessboard, you are
suddenly gone .....
Almost like you were drawn.
With one yawn I go to bed.
Upon a time you were there,
Where are you ? Oh ! Daffodils.
I woke up and realized, it was all a mere
dream ............
As I analyzed and energized .........
© Greg C., San Jose, CA
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Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 10 2021 at 10:49 am
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This poem is a true tribute to "Wordsworth". His poem Daffodils inspired me to write this poem.