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There's no YOU without ME

October 5, 2021
By abigailn1 BRONZE, Bogalusa, Louisiana
abigailn1 BRONZE, Bogalusa, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Everyone has a part of themselves that they hide. Even from the ones they love most."<br /> -Spiderman


They say... 
Climb any mountain 
Swim any sea 
Everything I am 
You've helped me to be 
And when you leave, I want you back immediately 
It's like an urgency On the phone "911, what's your emergency?"  

Like false prescriptions 
You fit right into my description 
If you were a drug, you'd be my addiction.  
And in addition... 
You've always been my volition 
 
You're my delight 
Even when it's dark you shine 
So bright 
You've helped me raise my pride 
Together, we have laughed and cried 
I couldn't see anyone else by my side 



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on Oct. 7 2021 at 10:32 am
wanderervl BRONZE, Shanghai, Other
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I could sense rich layers of emotions inside your poem. I really like "they say" at the beginning of the poem, creating a contrast to what comes after. Not sure about the rhyming though, sometimes it feels like the rhymes are a little repetitive and forced. Just my personal opinion! A great piece of poetry.

on Oct. 7 2021 at 10:32 am
wanderervl BRONZE, Shanghai, Other
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments
I could sense rich layers of emotions inside your poem. I really like "they say" at the beginning of the poem, creating a contrast to what comes after. Not sure about the rhyming though, sometimes it feels like the rhymes are a little repetitive and forced. Just my personal opinion! A great piece of poetry.