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Brother MAG

February 11, 2022
By rayrayrob BRONZE, San Francisco, California
rayrayrob BRONZE, San Francisco, California
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my built-in best friend

no longer lives next door

he begins his own life

too far to knock between the walls


no longer lives next door

word puns and silly walks go far away

too far to knock between the walls

the house is quiet and


word puns and silly walks go far away

too far to hear my voice call

the house is quiet and

I miss you


The author's comments:

My brother has been at my side all of my life. He left for college earlier this year, and I wanted to try to express what his empty room feels like to me as I pass by it each day.


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Afra ELITE said...
on Feb. 20 2022 at 12:28 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

This poem is really touching...How much you love and miss your brother is clearly shown through this...
Good work getting this on editor's choice...