This piece is sincerely exquisite. I very much admire the many comparisons you make in your work because I can relate every line of this poem to my life. I am not a fan of free verse poems, but after reading this piece, I feel that I can look at this form of poetry on a whole new level. “Sometimes it seems like no matter what you try /nothing fits.” Relating to this line is easy for me because there have been numerous times in life where I feel I have done my best, but things still do not work out. Although I can relate to various parts of the poem, I believe the most excellent part was, “The last piece always fits just right and though you are/happy to be finished with your work, /it is sad to see everything that has been done coming/to an end. /Right now all the pieces don't quite fit. /But someday I will this finish this puzzle /I like to call me life.” I adore that you compared ending the puzzle to ending your life. Keep up your awesome work!

This is so true, and I completely agree with this poem.. it's a great metaphor of life and a puzzle.