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a hidden suprise

November 1, 2009
By ebear BRONZE, Lee&#39s Summit, Missouri
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Time to let the sunsyhine seep in,
Through my skin,
To warm my fingers and my hands,
Working through the sands,
Finding their way in this world,
Tell me if I'm crazy,
But there's an oyester to this pearl,
A hidden suprise,
Behind my eyes,
That only I can see,
But clearly it makes no sense to me.

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InkWriter13 said...
on Jun. 10 2012 at 6:46 pm

I like your use of rhymes here. Kind of short--could lengthen it more to deepend the impact on readers. Nice clear message. Story of life--and others too probably. We are all finding our way in this world and often our path in life is a surprise and not our planned route. Very true. Great writing. :D

Please read and comment on my poem titled "The Greatness of Tomorrow"? Thx :)