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Living in the Moment

November 10, 2009
By KrazyK1993 BRONZE, Beaumont, Texas
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KrazyK1993 BRONZE, Beaumont, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Life happens in the instant..."

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Life is the flash of light;
gone as soon as you turn

Life is like a dream;
all too soon we awake

Life is like a Memoir;
read once and tossed aside

Life is like a raod trip;
a long and bumpy ride

Life is like candy;
great until it's gone

Life is like the rain;
beatiful and dangerous

Life is like a boat;
sometimes you sink

Life is like a book;
written for you alone

"Life happens in the instant..."


What's your story?

© Beth S., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
Everyone everywhere has a story. It may be dull, it may be tragic, but everyone has there own "book" to write. Don't be afraid to set down your pencil and pick up your pen;)
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This article has 16 comments.

silverwolf63 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 15 2012 at 9:44 pm
silverwolf63 BRONZE, Dunnville, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Galations 2:20 "I have been crucified with Christ and I no longer live, but Christ lives in me. The life I now live in the body, I live by faith in the Son of God, who loved me and gave himself for me."

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good job! very creative
redpanda26 SILVER said...
on Dec. 3 2011 at 3:35 pm
redpanda26 SILVER, Chevy Chase, Maryland
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Whoa! I just read "I Am Offended" and I'm shocked the same person wrote both of these. This is excellent!! Try writing more like this.
sunshine04 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 8:51 am
sunshine04 BRONZE, Vindhyanagar, Other
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its super awesome and i agree with u 
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 11:09 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
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Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

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Wow! I love this poem and I totally agree! Great job! You should write more! :)
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 10:50 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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This is cool but I like your "I am offended" article better. You're a great poet!
M_IML DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 12 2011 at 4:38 pm
M_IML DIAMOND, Ganei Tikva, Other
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I'm surprised....I totally disagreed with what you said in "offender", but this? This is great!
Jakethesnake BRONZE said...
on Nov. 21 2010 at 7:39 pm
Jakethesnake BRONZE, Hernando, Mississippi
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&quot;Read, Read... Read everything, then write.&quot;-William Faulkner

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I personally HATED your I am offended article, but this I love.
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 31 2010 at 3:14 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
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This is beautiful. Life is exactly like how you described it. I LOVED this.
Still_Waters26 SILVER said...
on Aug. 31 2010 at 12:21 pm
Still_Waters26 SILVER, Ladysmith, Wisconsin
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&quot;We few, we happy few/we band of brothers/For he to-day that sheds his blood with me/Shall be my brother&quot;<br /> -Shakespeare, &quot;Henry V&quot;

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I loved this.  Really cool and creative.  Nice...
Kasumi BRONZE said...
on May. 29 2010 at 10:11 pm
Kasumi BRONZE, Mequon, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
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I really like this thought about life being like your own story. its how I have always thought life to be like. Great job, I LOVED it!
Veritytrue SILVER said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 6:26 pm
Veritytrue SILVER, LaVista, Nebraska
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I loved it! Life truly happens only moment to moment, and I think you really highlighted the importance of living it that way. Great job!
BeautifulSoul BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 11:12 am
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
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I truly loved this poem, because it's so deep and I think most of us take life for granted.

Excellent job =•)
supp said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 6:37 pm
this was really good :)
thepreechyteenager said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:52 pm
i liked it, especially ur comments on ur article, i think that will be one of my favorite quotes
alli.babi. SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:03 pm
alli.babi. SILVER, Pendleton, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
in order to be irreplaceable, one must always be different.--Coco Chanel.

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i love this poem! : ] great job!
ilovetinkerbell GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 3:11 pm
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
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i loved it. you did an awesome job on writing this. Life is often like what you described. great job.