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November 18, 2009
By sgrace SILVER, West Chester, Pennsylvania
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sgrace SILVER, West Chester, Pennsylvania
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divided
almost in half
missing the eloquent words
that flowed from my fingertips
now replaced by
sweat
and work.
and pain.
neither committed.
either which side
failing
hollow on the
in
sides
out
sides
in
between
the lines,
grayness is a terrible mixture of color and cold
leaving the
drowing universe ready to swallow up
my irrevelant
mediocracy.

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Series BRONZE said...
on Oct. 27 2021 at 6:18 pm
Series BRONZE, Wailuku, Hawaii
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Somehow your work sounds so familiar. As if I myself could have easily written these same words. We are alike you and I. Your work is a raw take on your perspective. And I love it.