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Truth Part-taken

November 23, 2009
By b.rai DIAMOND, College Station, Texas
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b.rai DIAMOND, College Station, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
you never really know what love is, until it breaks your heart.

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You cry,you weep
You look,you seek
To find the one you love
You fuss,you fight
You give in,you sigh
Because it's just a hopeless search
The pain,it hurts
You say it'll work
But i don't think
That we should be
Because it would be just a senseless cause
You say it's real,you say it's there
You say we are,you say you care
But is it me you really love
Do you longfor them,do you long for her
When you look at me,does your heart not stir
Don't you lie,i know the truth
'Cause you don't love me
How can we be,what can we do
About this thing we're in right now

© Eric S., W. Logonier, IN

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b.rai DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 16 2010 at 7:59 am
b.rai DIAMOND, College Station, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
you never really know what love is, until it breaks your heart.

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thank you bunchessss!:)
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 18 2010 at 9:01 pm
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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wow this is great-amazing-i just love it!!!