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December 22, 2009
By KobyObi4 BRONZE, Lemont, Illinois
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"We live by faith not by sight." ---2 Corinthians 5:7

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Sure, everybody has that one day.
That one day when you want to give up.
You just want to lie down and die.
Just give up and surrender.
Just throw your hands up.
But the one word you should follow is: go.
Go and take your chance.
This could be your lucky day.
Go follow your dreams.
Go take an adventure before the day passes you by.
Just go.

© Charlotte H, New York, NY

The author's comments:
This poem was written in June of 2009. It was my birthday but my dad was having a rough day. He was starting to give up on the world. So I wrote this poem for him and he loved it. This poem gives off a powerful message to everyone. When you are having a rough day, you should just go.
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forget_me_not SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 8:30 pm
forget_me_not SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
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wow. this is a powerful poem just as you intended. lovely.