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Signs that you have a good life

March 2, 2010
By rainlover1994 SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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rainlover1994 SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"When you get to the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on."

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A long needed break,
Full of sunshine and laughter,
And cool breezes,
That blow away sweat and worries.

Other siblings still have school,
Ha, Ha, Ha,
No sadness is felt,
For the lack of school oriented obligations.

My baby sister,
Heads off to her first day of Kindergarten,
And is the Heidi Klum of her hallway,
Walking with a confidence so many people would die for.

Time is spent splashing and wading,
In the pool on a cool, boiling day,
True, everything has to end sometime,
But certain things we have the joy of reliving.

© Dustan S., Hopkinton, MA

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Everybody has a moment when they feel on top of the world, like nothing could ever go wrong.
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rainlover1994 SILVER said...
on Mar. 15 2010 at 4:48 pm
rainlover1994 SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When you get to the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on."

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BTW... <br />
I would love it :) if you could give me an opinion on something else I wrote
rainlover1994 SILVER said...
on Mar. 15 2010 at 4:43 pm
rainlover1994 SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When you get to the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on.&quot;

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Thanks! Hope you can have an abundance of those moments :)
Kenneth-H SILVER said...
on Mar. 15 2010 at 12:16 am
Kenneth-H SILVER, Red Rock, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Ichigo, what&#039;s the difference between a King and his horse? I don&#039;t mean kiddy s*** like &#039;One&#039;s a person and one&#039;s an animal&#039; or &#039;One has two legs and one has four&#039;. If their form, ability, and power were exactly the same, why is it that one becomes the King and controls the battle, while the other becomes the horse and carries the King?! There&#039;s only one answer; INSTINCT!&quot; ~ Ichigo&#039;s Inner Hollow from the anime/manga &#039;Bleach&#039; by Tite Kubo

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You're right, both of our poems (RE: True Beauty) are quite similar. Also, I really like your poem, and your own comment is very true!
Milo! said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 4:32 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.