Goodbye | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. Goodbye

Goodbye

March 19, 2010
By sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
More by this author
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
27 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

View profile

I don't know how we got here,
or why;
All I know is that I could
never say goodbye to you
But see, I'm certain this is
exactly what I must do
You are now flying away from
the nest and as horrifying as
it is,
I understand it's for the best;
Because you will soon be
gone love,
as aesthetic and graceful as a
dove;
I can't even fathom how long
this pain will last, but in order for it to pass on, I need to
let go of our past.
You're finally able to spread
your wings and soar through
the sky;
I am aware now that I must
finally say my goodbyes

© Ashley B., Potomac, MD

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
I hate splash water on the lack of there-forth
By Anonymous
Poetry
Death At Your Door
By sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM
West Jordan, Utah
sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM, West Jordan, Utah
31 articles 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
Poetry
The Ending
By OurFrost GOLD
Galt, California
OurFrost GOLD, Galt, California
10 articles 1 photo 4 comments
View profile
Poetry
Summer Day
By Lost-In-Life GOLD
Whitby, Other
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s never to late, if it weren&#039;t for the last minute many things would never get done!

View profile
Poetry
The Moon
By Izzy Hare BRONZE
Camano Island, Washington
Izzy Hare BRONZE, Camano Island, Washington
2 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Praying for October
By Poe_poe SILVER
DeMotte, Indiana
Poe_poe SILVER, DeMotte, Indiana
7 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 8 comments.

BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on May. 17 2010 at 11:12 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

View profile

Loooooooove it!  ;)  As before, very touching, full of feeling and flows with a unique-ness.

-Rose

sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on May. 9 2010 at 9:40 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
27 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

View profile
of courrse!! (: luv 2
SilverDawn GOLD said...
on May. 5 2010 at 11:20 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
10 articles 0 photos 297 comments
View profile
=) please come check out my work too~! <3
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on May. 3 2010 at 7:53 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
27 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

View profile
lol thxx u!!:))
SilverDawn GOLD said...
on May. 1 2010 at 11:29 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
10 articles 0 photos 297 comments
View profile
very nice poem! although it's a sad poem, i find it very cute =) haha. nice work!
hello.beautiful PLATINUM said...
on May. 1 2010 at 10:21 am
hello.beautiful PLATINUM, New York, New York
35 articles 29 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Look at the nations and watch&mdash; and be utterly amazed. For I am going to do something in your days that you would not believe, even if you were told. -Habakkuk 1:5

View profile

This is really good.

You're a great writer.

sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 10:26 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
27 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

View profile
thank u so much! i really appreciate the feedback!!
JustMeAriee BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 10:37 pm
JustMeAriee BRONZE, Beaumont, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Because I care about you too much to look you deeply in the eyes it&#039;s because youve changed.&quot;<br /> &quot;If your looking for love and its staring you in the face then whyy are you questioning it?&quot;

View profile
this is one of the best poems i have ever read i really like it alot great job!!