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March 28, 2010
By LoveNmhyLiife BRONZE, Roanoke, Virginia
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LoveNmhyLiife BRONZE, Roanoke, Virginia
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"Its easy to fall inlove but it's very hard to fall out of it"

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you said
you would always be here
are you here now
"NO!!"

you said
that its me and you always
who is it now
"ME"

you said
you loved me
do i see love
"I WISH"

all i hear is
"you said"
"you said"
"you said"
what did you say
or for that matter
what did you mean

but all i see is
LIES
LIES
LIES &
negative answers

you made so many promises
but for some strange reason
you havent kept one

but i recently found out
there is one that you kept

you said
you will always love me
and all i can say now is
"I KNOW"

© Trisha Rogers, Highland Village, TX

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DancinDiva said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 12:37 am
DancinDiva, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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Live life to your fullest XD

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haha i love it! it soo relatres to my life as you can c in my poems u should check my other ones out!
Denali.B. BRONZE said...
on Apr. 22 2010 at 8:53 am
Denali.B. BRONZE, Calgary, Other
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&quot;Knowledge is knowing that a tomato is a fruit, wisdom is knowing that you don&#039;t put it in a fruit salad.&quot; - Unknown Source

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...this gave me the goosbumps...