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I Threw You My Heart

April 19, 2010
By JourneyWriter PLATINUM, Joliet, Illinois
JourneyWriter PLATINUM, Joliet, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-<br /> I took the one less traveled by,<br /> And that has made all the difference.<br /> <br /> -Robert Frost


I threw you my heart
You dropped it
And it broke
I didn’t think that that would happen
But it did
I saw it
My heart shattered on the concrete
You didn’t think twice
Before you let it slip from your fingers
It was a hard fall
And it hurt
So what can I do now
That my heart is broken?
I blame myself
But you’re the one responsible for the breaking
Maybe you should think again before you hurt another
Like that again



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on Feb. 3 2011 at 4:38 pm
artistinda_lonelily SILVER, Joliet, Illinois
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good job :) this makes me sad. i wrote one similar to this one... you should read it! i love your work!

on Jun. 6 2010 at 3:36 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

i don't know you i just saw that someone called u molly...but i like ur work anyways-check out some of mine!!

on Jun. 1 2010 at 6:52 pm
JourneyWriter PLATINUM, Joliet, Illinois
21 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-<br /> I took the one less traveled by,<br /> And that has made all the difference.<br /> <br /> -Robert Frost

hey, so im trying to figure out how i know you.....? sry, but i can't place ya, could you give me a hint...? thanks for the  comment! :D

on May. 17 2010 at 11:57 pm
fusrodahsaraaa GOLD, Albany, Other
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Wow this touched my 'Heart' lol. You are a creative and imaginitive writer. I enjoy reading your work. XX

rosegrink said...
on May. 13 2010 at 10:31 am

This is amzing! I love it! I love the things you write.

Keep me posted! :)


on May. 13 2010 at 1:42 am

"maybe you should thing again before you hurt another like that again"

this line spoke a lot to me. relates to a difficult experience


on May. 12 2010 at 4:19 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

(molly?...) i love this poem-you wrote it in such a new way for such a used subject-awesome job

truthseeker said...
on May. 12 2010 at 11:25 am
Molly, you have ventured further than I ever imagined you would with poetry! I am proud of you. Kudos!